Resources About Deep Point of View

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Deep point of view is a technique that modern writers use to make stories feel more compelling and immediate for the reader. You can use this technique in both first person and third person narration. And you can dip in and out of deep point of view when you want your scenes to have more or less emotional impact.

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Articles about deep point of view

For quick overviews or tips about deep point of view, check out these articles.

Books about deep point of view

For a deep dive into how deep point of view works and how to use it, check out one of these books.

Deep Point of View by Marcy Kennedy

With 100 five-star ratings, this is the best-reviewed book on how to write deep point of view. It covers the theory of how deep point of view works, offers examples, and also includes tips and writing exercises.

Kennedy explains that mastering deep point of view also provides a stronger grasp on showing instead of telling, helps authors get a handle on internal dialogue, and helps avoid problems like too much backstory, info dumps, and point-of-view errors. Plus, even though it uses more words, it actually feels faster-paced to the reader.

She’s got a clean, accessible style and this is a good book to get a nice overview of the material.

Marcy Kennedy writes science fiction and fantasy herself but is also a writing instructor and fiction editor. Plus, she is also the author of the 11-book Busy Writer’s Guides series, of which this book is one.

Get the book on Amazon for $4.99 for the ebook or $9.99 for the paperback.

Writing Deep Point Of View: Professional Techniques for Fiction Authors by Rayne Hall

This can book can be used as a self-study class, with a lesson per chapter, and exercises at the end of each chapter. It has 150 ratings, and an average score of 4.6 stars.

Hall explains how to pick your point of view character, and how to switch between point of view characters if you need to have more than one. While this isn’t a book for the absolute beginner, it is still very accessible and comprehensive.

Rayne Hall Rayne Hall is a fantasy and horror writer and the editor of the Ten Tales anthology series. She is also the author or co-author of the 36-book Writer’s Craft series, of which this book is one.

Get the book on Amazon for $4.99 for the ebook or $12.99 for the paperback. But if you’re a Kindle Unlimited subscriber, you can read it for free.

Rivet Your Readers with Deep Point of View by Jill Elizabeth Nelson

This is a handbook for how to transform writing that is not immersive into compelling deep point of view narrative. It has 374 ratings, and an average score of 4.4 stars.

Jill Elizabeth Nelson is an award-winning author and popular speaker and writing teacher. She writes romantic suspense. The book is extremely readable and the examples she offers are clear and make tons of sense.

Get the book on Amazon for $3.99 for the ebook or $5.99 for the paperback. But if you’re a Kindle Unlimited subscriber, you can read it for free.

And here are some more books that are on my reading list but that I haven’t had a chance to look at yet. When I do, I’ll update this article.

Finally, here’s a video you can watch by Bryn Donovan, author of Blank Page to Final Draft: How to Plot, Write, and Edit a Novel, Step By Step. This video is part of her free video course, “How to write a novel”.


Edited by Melody Friedenthal

MetaStellar editor and publisher Maria Korolov is a science fiction novelist, writing stories set in a future virtual world. And, during the day, she is an award-winning freelance technology journalist who covers artificial intelligence, cybersecurity and enterprise virtual reality. See her Amazon author page here and follow her on Twitter, Facebook, or LinkedIn, and check out her latest videos on the Maria Korolov YouTube channel. Email her at [email protected]. She is also the editor and publisher of Hypergrid Business, one of the top global sites covering virtual reality.